tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1138353765082573154.post9205678268575560045..comments2024-03-27T07:12:07.640+00:00Comments on Matt Dawson: storyboard- pages 6-7matt dawsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06290520346352238280noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1138353765082573154.post-91797552535159097952007-11-06T11:48:00.000+00:002007-11-06T11:48:00.000+00:00Hi Matt,The pages look great! Even though they're ...Hi Matt,<BR/><BR/>The pages look great! Even though they're black and white, you can almost see the colour.<BR/><BR/>There is one thing I'm not sure about, are the blocks of text too much for the littluns? Are you planning to streamline the words at all? Maybe the FIZZES and BUZZES could be moved to around the lightbulb. "They" say 'Show don't tell'.<BR/><BR/>But, it's a small thing, really I think all the pages are looking Luursh, as the they say in Bristle.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1138353765082573154.post-67834826800318713162007-11-06T08:43:00.000+00:002007-11-06T08:43:00.000+00:00Again, the pages are looking really good. The layo...Again, the pages are looking really good. The layout and detail in 6&7 is superb!<BR/><BR/>Are you going to produce all the pages to a fully finished level or is this going to be a book-dummy with a few pages fully polished and the rest just in rougher stages?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1138353765082573154.post-23190684008519536612007-11-04T19:56:00.000+00:002007-11-04T19:56:00.000+00:00This is coming along beautifully. I love your com...This is coming along beautifully. I love your compositions and how you seem to have thought everything out really well. I especially enjoy that light bulb. The book is going to be lovely when it's all done.Jacqueline Hudon-Verrellihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09433580754120587891noreply@blogger.com